Read your title without looking at the photo. Can you tell what arrives?
For a mug, Blue Ceramic Mug, 12 oz names the item and gives two useful details. Start there, then add anything else a buyer needs to choose.
Check your current title
Open the listing in My Listings and review Title Readability. Look for wording that's hard to follow or a product detail that's missing.
Keep important material names and sizes even if they make the title longer. Commas, slashes and dashes are fine when they make it easier to read.
Ask Marma for another version
Paste your title into Marma Chat and ask:
Make this title easier to read. Keep the product, material and size accurate. Tell me what you changed.
Read the result aloud. Keep the version that sounds clear and still describes your item. Save your original before editing in Etsy.
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